I remember the way you smiled
The way your dimples curled
The way your hands felt on my skin
The way you made me tingle
I remember your love
I remember your heart
I remember your lies
I remember your bruises
I remember your hurt
and all the things that made me flirt
I remember my time with you
I remember all the cries and lies and heartfelt ties
The I love you's, hugs, kisses, touch, sex, fuck, drugs
Baby if I could go back in time I would change everything
I would take it all back
I would dodge that bullet
I would make sure to sit and cry
I would change everything
Great use of repetition and rhyme throughout. Maybe change the 5 middle remembers to a list of sorts. Loved the sincere feel :]
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